Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Oct 24, 2021 10:12
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Arabic term
تُحلّق
Arabic to English
Art/Literary
General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
Syria
Hi everyone,
I am translating a Syrian short story about three poor brothers who dream of becoming famous footballers. Just before this section, they have talked about how some of Brazil's most famous players today used to be poor children.
I know this verb can mean fly/hover/circle in the air/surround, but I don't see how that could fit into the English sentence idiomatically. Any ideas?
محمود وأخوته یحلمون أیضاً بفلسطین، أو بدربٍ إلیها یمرّ عبر أيّ نادٍ تبدأ مكاسبه من سندویشة فلافل، وتعلو وتعلو إلى حیث تُحلّق الیوم نجوم
البرازیل...
[draft translation] Mahmoud and his brothers dream of Palestine, too. Or at least of a path leading to it, through a club that pays in falafel sandwiches, until the pay goes up and up to...
thanks in advance!
Anam
I am translating a Syrian short story about three poor brothers who dream of becoming famous footballers. Just before this section, they have talked about how some of Brazil's most famous players today used to be poor children.
I know this verb can mean fly/hover/circle in the air/surround, but I don't see how that could fit into the English sentence idiomatically. Any ideas?
محمود وأخوته یحلمون أیضاً بفلسطین، أو بدربٍ إلیها یمرّ عبر أيّ نادٍ تبدأ مكاسبه من سندویشة فلافل، وتعلو وتعلو إلى حیث تُحلّق الیوم نجوم
البرازیل...
[draft translation] Mahmoud and his brothers dream of Palestine, too. Or at least of a path leading to it, through a club that pays in falafel sandwiches, until the pay goes up and up to...
thanks in advance!
Anam
Proposed translations
(English)
4 | shine | Ayman Massoud |
3 +1 | Soar _ Shine | Ibrahim Alahmar |
4 | it rises higher and higher till it reaches the shining Brazilian footballers | Honey Hashem |
Change log
Nov 6, 2021 11:20: Ayman Massoud Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
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shine
to where Brazilian football stars are shining
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "I like this. It enhances the metaphorical aspect of these "stars" being real stars in the sky. Thanks!"
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Soar _ Shine
"where Brazilian stars are soaring/shining".
يحلق means here to rise to a majestic stature.
يحلق means here to rise to a majestic stature.
5 days
it rises higher and higher till it reaches the shining Brazilian footballers
it rises higher and higher till it reaches the shining Brazilian footballers
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