Hesham Elshahed Jul 29, 2011:

You may take "water" out. You also may consider " Pottery vessels" instead of " Porcelain water container", it will be much better.

Eyal Sherf (asker) Jul 29, 2011:

Thanks again, Hesham. Here is the context:
قلت لي ساعتها مقعد واحد يكفي لينبت العشق منا على الشجر .. وقلت لي سنؤلف حكاية عن المدن والممالك وننقشها على خزف القلل وعلى أبواب المنازل

Hesham Elshahed Jul 29, 2011:

By the way,, You're welcome....

Hesham Elshahed Jul 29, 2011:

I have to see more context to answer this question. Without more context, I would not change it.

Eyal Sherf (asker) Jul 29, 2011:

Hesham, Thank you for this. May I ask you to further break down the phrase? Do you have to say "water" containers, or just "containers" is enough?