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Thread poster: EitanO
EitanO
EitanO
United Kingdom
Dec 4, 2014

Hi,

I have translated the following saying "do not learn in order to be called Wise or Rabbi or Elder, rather, learn out of love, and in the end, honor will come" as " . لا تعلم من أجل أن يسمى حكيم أو حاخام، أو شيخ, بدلا من ذلك، تعلم من الحب، وفي نهاية المطاف، سوف يأتي الشرف".

Is this translation grammatically correct in arabic?

Can it be improved or simplified?

Thanks
 
Chakir Mahjo (X)
Chakir Mahjo (X)  Identity Verified
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word to word Dec 4, 2014

This is a word to word translation (machine translation). You have to translate the contexte and not words.

Good luck in your endeavour.
 
EitanO
EitanO
United Kingdom
TOPIC STARTER
Thanks for feedback and Modified translation for review Dec 8, 2014

Thank you so much for your feedback. Based on the original text, I have modified the translation

It very be useful to know, if the conveys any information or is it unintelligible

واما العلم الخاص بمنافع الدين فالعلم الاعلى , وهو العلم الالاهي, فان طلبه لادراك الدين به لازم علينا, واما طلبه لادراك منافع الدنيا به فمحظور, لقول اوائلنا ع"س ... See more
Thank you so much for your feedback. Based on the original text, I have modified the translation

It very be useful to know, if the conveys any information or is it unintelligible

واما العلم الخاص بمنافع الدين فالعلم الاعلى , وهو العلم الالاهي, فان طلبه لادراك الدين به لازم علينا, واما طلبه لادراك منافع الدنيا به فمحظور, لقول اوائلنا ع"س

وذلك لتحب الله ربك وَتقبل قوله وَتلزم طاعته . لِكَيْ لا يقول الانسان فاقرا كتاب الله تعالى لِكَيْ اتمجد كخكيم, فادرس الشريعة لِكَيْ اتمجد كحاخام, فاقوص التلمود لِكَيْ اتمجد كشيخ لاجلس في المحكمة الشرعية. واما بمحبة فيدرس الشريعة وفي حينة يصلك المجد. ▲ Collapse
 


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